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让自己的GRE作文写得更具有渲染能力的五大技巧

时间:2014-08-08 来源:未知 作者:珠海科润留学 阅读:

  让自己的新GRE作文写的更具有渲染能力,就要灵活运用一些语法和可能简单的但是很地道的表达方式。下面就为大家进行GRE作文句子技巧的介绍,增强文章的表现能力,考生们认真练习GRE作文技巧,争取取得理想的新GRE作文效果。

  一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词

  1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如:
  Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown.The landscape seems drab. Revision:The browngrass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)Or: The landscape, bare and brown,begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)
  2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如:
  1) Weak: The team members are good players.Revision: The team members play well.
  2) Weak: One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.Revision: One worker's planeliminates tardiness.
  3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如:
  1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.Revision: No opportunity forpromotion exists.
  2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.

  二、多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了

       例如:
  1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walkedslowly) past my desk.
  2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.Better: She compares prices and quality.

  三、尽量运用主动语态

       例如:
  1、Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.Better: Charity has supportedthe organization.
  2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on aplate.

  四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语

       例如:
  1、Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.Improved: My little sisterprefers chocolate milk.
  2、Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow yourrecommendations.Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow yourrecommendation.
  3、Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratorycaught fire.Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratorycaught fire.
  4、Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in differentstores.Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.

  五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语

        例如:
  1、Weak: They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.Improved: They will notagree to any of his proposals.
  2、Weak: I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures nextfall.Improved: I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.
  上述就是新GRE作文句子技巧的介绍,有助于提升考生们在新GRE作文考试中的语言表达能力,以及可以增强新GRE考试文章的渲染能力。

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